English homework suspenseful story opening. Ali Qayyum 8W1S
I did not no what it was about that day,
but something felt abnormal,
my memory is quite rusty but I will give you details that will make your
emotions burst,
That day changed my life for the worse. Will it ever happen again?
It was years back…
February 10, 2015 at 10:36 am
The type of “know” where you have an idea about something is different from the “no” as in “There are no buses running”. You have mixed them up.
This is written almost like a poem: no problem with that but it isn’t what you were asked for. Can you edit this so it looks like prose? This means paragraphs and sentences not random
line
breaks!